I’m sharing recipes and tips on being frugal while polishing up my photography and creative writing skills. There’s an occasional spiritual discussion, a book review here and there, and probably more pictures of my dog than are strictly necessary. It’s part chat with a girlfriend over a glass of sweet tea, part conversation overheard in the grocery store checkout line, and part Thanksgiving dinner with the crazy branch of the family.

Wednesday, September 15, 2010

Reliving "He Graduates in Twenty Days"

The SITS Back to Blogging Event assignment for today is to re-upload a post with a title that you are particularly proud of and explain why. This was really hard for me, because I just don't do a great job titling my posts. I know I should have more keywords, be less vague, but sometimes the title is harder for me to write than the whole rest of the post! Anyway, this one was titled: "He Graduates in Twenty Days" and just the sight of those words brought tears to my eyes, because I remember this day so well, and "He graduates in twenty days" were the words my heart was tapping out in Morse Code in my chest that day. It was a tough one.

He wore it all week.
His first week of Boy Scout Camp
in the Summer of 2003
He had just finished fifth grade
and he'd be gone for a week
a whole, entire week.
Gone all the way to Camp Daniel Boone
in the mountains of North Carolina
where he'd sleep in a tent
and swim in a cold mountain lake.
He came home tanned,
and filthy,
and very pleased with himself.
I thought he had a sore throat
from sleeping outdoors all week.
The I realized
his voice had started to change.
It's hard to let them
grow up.

Disclaimer: One of this week's prompts on Mama Kat's Writers' Workshop involves writing a 20-line poem dedicated to a favorite item of clothing. I'm not consciously trying to find things to get sappy and emotional about as my eldest chick prepares to leave the nest . . . really.

Remember Thelma and Louise? They will go home with one lucky participant in the SITS Back To Blogging Event, and I think they would be happiest at my house. In fact, I am prepared to repaint and replace the flooring in my pantry / laundry room just to make them feel comfy. Here are the people responsible for Thelma and Louise: Standards of Excellence, Westar, and Florida Builder Appliances. I don't know who the genius is that came up with the idea to manufacture these in that perfectly gorgeous shade of turquoise, but I hope they got a big bonus!

5 comments:

Chaplain Donna said...

How sweet. The kids grow up very quickly. This is my daughter's senior year and it is really exciting for both of us!

JDaniel4's Mom said...

What a wonderful poem! I love that you were able to bring such meaning into just a few words.

Stopping from SITS!

Helen McGinn said...

Aw. My daughter just had her first school trip away and she was so missed. She seemed to have grown a few inches by the time she got back. Lovely post. x

Karen said...

Awww...how sweet. I have a harder time with post titles than writing the post itself too. My kidlets are still young, but I can only imagine how hard it will be to send them on their way when the time comes! :>

TheSublimeLife said...

I know what you mean about the titles! I have a hard time too! Seeing what you wrote about your son makes me sad and excited about my own two sons. My oldest will be 3 in december. When my second was born I held him, tiny in my arms, and watched my oldest bouncing arouund singing and thought it just seemed like yesterday I was cradling him. It dawned on me that being twice as busy with two, it'd now go even faster. Needless to say, I shed a few hormonal tears. Congrats on his graduation!

 
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